Gone by Phyllis Beckman - Your Daily Poem

Gone
by
Phyllis Beckman

blossom atremble
awaiting the hummingbird
zip, dip, quick sip, gone

© by Phyllis Beckman.
Used with the author's permission.

Phyllis Beckman lives in Onalaska, Wisconsin, where she writes a poem every day and shares it with 76 family members and friends. She credits the Tuesday Edition of the Mississippi Valley Writers of La Crosse, Wisconsin and the Wisconsin Fellowship of Poets for ongoing inspiration and encouragement.

ranchhandwife:
Smile maker!
Posted 07/14/2015 11:49 AM

Jo:
Very well done. Terrific haiku.
Posted 07/10/2015 04:21 PM

transitions:
Clever haiku! I love this form, each word is important and this is classic with a humorous twist. Brava!
Posted 07/10/2015 12:23 PM

Lori Levy:
Beautiful image.
Posted 07/10/2015 11:52 AM

njc:
a perfect example of when less is more! nice.
Posted 07/10/2015 07:56 AM

abell:
Lovely haiku. This describes the humminbird so well! I am a fan of haiku verse, thanks for thus one.
Posted 07/10/2015 06:14 AM

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