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Here we are my grandson, age four, and me.
In old shoes and torn jeans, we use child-sized
scoops and rakes as we ready the soft earth.
We're planting rainbows of petunias.
The boy's hair splashes sunlight gold; his hands
love the dirt as they scoop holes for starts.
I'm clumsy in the art of planting flowers
but the boy thinks I know everything. He
works close to me, my garden prodigy.
Looking back I recall something I lacked:
I would have traded my Babe Ruth rookie
baseball card for a grandpa with bent back
and torn jeans who planted petunias
with patient hands, and endless time for me.
© Michael Escoubas.
Used here with the author's permission.
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Candace:
The gift of time cannot be bought. Wonderful sentiment, Michael.
Posted 09/10/2015 03:49 PM
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plgoodman:
Lovely, Michael. You capture it simply and beautifully.
Posted 09/10/2015 03:07 PM
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Janet Leahy:
To have "endless time" for a child, a treasure for
child and grandfather. Lovely poem, thanks Michael.
Posted 09/10/2015 02:32 PM
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Jancan:
a lovely, memorable poem sure to resonate with other poets--especially grandparents!
Janice
Posted 09/10/2015 12:55 PM
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Larry Schug:
This poem hits close to home. I'm an old guy and I still think about what it would have been like to have known my grandfathers. Very visual poem; I like the picture it paints in my head.
Posted 09/10/2015 10:41 AM
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KevinArnold:
Trading a Babe Ruth rookie card is a wonderful way to show deep love in our material world.
Posted 09/10/2015 10:34 AM
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Jo:
A loving poem, Mike, and memory making your grandson and you will remember.
Posted 09/10/2015 09:59 AM
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Cindy:
I was lucky to have a grandpa like that; he was amazing. Thanks for letting me remember him again.
Posted 09/10/2015 09:33 AM
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mimi:
grandfathers are a treasure, for sure...good poem, thanks!
Posted 09/10/2015 08:12 AM
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Glen Sorestad:
Such a fine poem, Michael, and an original use of the sonnet form as well.
Posted 09/10/2015 07:26 AM
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Ross Kightly:
Rightly viewed there are no 'ordinary' events - as this splendid poem demonstrates categorically.
Posted 09/10/2015 04:34 AM
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