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The gazelles
speed by in their
huge metallic herds
on both sides
of the highway.
The solitary,
powerful nomad
hunting them
with his radar gun
crouches behind
some trees in the median.
Out of the corner
of her eye she sees him
too late--his eyes
already flashing
in her rearview,
her heart leaping
like an antelope
pronking in her chest
as she flees among
the other antelope,
hoping it isn't her
he will outrun,
overtake, pull over
the rumble strip
to the shoulder,
his grille breathing
hot on her tail lights,
taking his time
writing her up,
her doe-eyed
hazards blinking.
© by Paul Hostovsky.
Used with the author's permission.
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Paul Hostovsky starting writing poetry in the fifth grade, inspired by his novelist father. Today, he is the author of more than a dozen books and his award-winning poems have been featured in a wide variety of print and online journals. Paul lives in Boston, where he is a sign language interpreter. Learn more about him at www.paulhostovsky.com.
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transitions:
Loved the clever metaphor...I know just how that gazelle felt!
Posted 01/23/2017 03:13 PM
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Lori Levy:
Love the animal images.
Posted 01/23/2017 01:49 PM
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Caro70:
Masterful, Paul. Great example of compression and extended metaphor!
Posted 01/23/2017 09:43 AM
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Larry Schug:
As soon as I saw Paul's name appear on my screen I pumped my fist and said "Yes"! Always have liked your work, Paul. This is a beauty.
Posted 01/23/2017 07:32 AM
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blueskies:
Pronking...a dynamic word/visual for that moment in the poem. Thanks, Paul.
Posted 01/23/2017 06:04 AM
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