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Morning was in a marvelous mood—
Sun, like a flame thrower,
over the horizon came
spreading its grand mantle of light
In one sweeping gesture,
dismissed all traces
of night
© by Jana Kalina.
Used here with the author's permission.
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Jana Kalina lives with her husband on Vancouver Island. During her lifetime, she has lived extensively on three of the planet's seven continents and, today, her pursuits can be distilled down to three things: Buddhism, bonsai cultivation and, of course, poetry--especially haiku.
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Lori Levy:
Especially like the image of the sun as a "flame thrower."
Posted 10/28/2018 10:33 PM
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barbsteff:
Love the first line!
Posted 10/28/2018 05:15 PM
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wordartdjc:
So well thought through in succinct lovely language.
Posted 10/28/2018 11:13 AM
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Jean Colonomos-1:
I love the first line. It's originality carries through the whole poem.e
Posted 10/28/2018 10:32 AM
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michael escoubas:
Wonderful, all-encompassing poem! Thank you Jana.
Posted 10/28/2018 08:36 AM
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