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We own the night.
We do—we the vampires of sound,
the blighted
bed-banishers. It is ours.
We clip our bits of sleep
into the cerebral night-life,
our walking sticks etching
the cadence
of our breath into the ground,
our ceremony of mouths open in wait
and we are redeemed:
God hears our prayers.
We are singing.
This poem first appeared: in Blue Monday Review (Fall, 2015).
Used here with permission.
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Rebecca O'Bern's poem, "Lost and Found", won 2nd place in Connecticut Poetry Review's 2017 Al Savard Memorial Poetry Contest, and her poem, "Just Keep Doing Your Thing", was named co-winner of the Connecticut Review's 2010 Leslie Leeds Poetry Prize. Rebecca received her MFA in creative writing in 2017 and, most recently, served as co-editor-in-chief of Mud Season Review. When not writing, she enjoys drinking hot tea and reflecting on the work of great thinkers and innovators throughout history. Find her on social media at twitter.com/rebeccaobern.
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Jancan:
Very concise, descriptive, gentle piece on those who "own the night"--causing others to flee the bed. :-)
Janice
Posted 11/17/2020 09:18 AM
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A Jenkin:
A great description - original and humorous... Thanks for sharing it, I enjoyed it
Posted 11/16/2020 12:39 PM
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paradea:
Breathe-Rite Strips...Snore no more, or so my sister says!!! I love this poem!!!
Posted 11/16/2020 10:00 AM
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michael escoubas:
Okay! I'll buy into some sort of heavenly choir . . . God gets all the credit though, for his "tolerant ears." Well done, Rebecca.
Posted 11/16/2020 09:35 AM
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mail@schoolbusmart.com:
A vampire of noise - we sleeping werewolves bay while our bed-victims pray----/// nice, tight piece. Randy
Posted 11/16/2020 09:07 AM
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cork:
Oh, to elevate the snore to a position of status!
Posted 11/16/2020 09:00 AM
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Larry Schug:
I love the duet my wife and dog sing sometimes, though I've never thought of it as a song until reading this poem.
Posted 11/16/2020 08:32 AM
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Sharon Waller Knutson:
Clever, unique, humorous, picturesque. My favorite image is "we the vampires of sound, the blighted bed-banishers."
Posted 11/16/2020 06:27 AM
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