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Winter afternoon
Such snow: soft, joyous, silent
Disappearing world...
February thaw
Melody of melting ice
Cardinal chirps along
Sun shines on the mint
jauntily sporting some green,
chuckling at the snow
© by Arlene Gay Levine.
Used with the author's permission.
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Arlene Gay Levine is an award-winning poet, author, and educator who lives with her husband in New York City. The author of 39 Ways to Open Your Heart: An Illuminated Meditation (Conari Press) and Movie Life (Finishing Line Press), her poetry and prose have found a home in The New York Times, numerous anthologies and journals, an Off-Broadway show, a CD, and radio programs. Arlene has served as a judge for the Illinois State and Virginia State Poetry Society Contests, and is the creator/facilitator of Logos Therapy™, a transformational writing process. Learn more about her at http://www.arlenegaylevine.com.
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jamvan:
lovely sentiments - beautifully observed
Posted 02/25/2021 10:32 PM
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Arlene Gay Levine:
My thanks to everyone for your wonderful comments!
Posted 02/25/2021 03:47 PM
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Lori Levy:
Especially like the last stanza with the mint "chuckling at the snow."
Posted 02/25/2021 02:23 PM
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Anastasia:
Perfect words, perfectly chosen! I love cardinals!
Posted 02/25/2021 12:54 PM
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bobbi43sml@aol.com:
Melody of melting ice, also my favorite, as I watched the last traces of what might be my last snow angel ever... fade away.
Powerful in it's delicate balance. Thank you
Posted 02/25/2021 09:26 AM
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cork:
I love the intensity of brevity!
Posted 02/25/2021 09:05 AM
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michael escoubas:
Lovely sequence, Arlene . . . so in tune with seasonal feelings.
Posted 02/25/2021 09:04 AM
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Stephen Anderson:
The Zen of these haiku is ever present and captivating.
Posted 02/25/2021 08:47 AM
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Ron Stewart:
I love the soft joyous transition from winter to spring
Posted 02/25/2021 08:44 AM
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Larry Schug:
Haiku has such power to evoke beauty and wonder. Good work!
Posted 02/25/2021 07:16 AM
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Sharon Waller Knutson:
I love this sparse picturesque poem. I can see the white snow, red cardinal, green grass and hear the silence, the melody of the melting ice, chirping and chuckling.
Posted 02/25/2021 06:34 AM
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Simontw7:
"Melody of melting ice".... brilliant
Posted 02/25/2021 05:19 AM
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