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Ghazal for the Athens-Concord Town Social, West Virginia
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Margaret Coombs


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Sun's high in August, we picnic when it gets hot.
Sidewalks stuffed with strollers, squalling kids, we celebrate hot.
 
Form a snaking line. Build towers of hot dogs, chili, slaw.
Workers sweat in merlot smocks, heft trays steaming hot.
 
Mr. Green-Haired Clown mimes to toddlers; wags goofy shoes.
While waltzing with bubbles, his whiteface melts. It's that hot.
 
The peace group and food co-op share shade, stack leaflets.
Friends in tie-dyed tees crowd in. Out there's too hot.
 
Bluegrass beats jazz the crowd. Lonesome lyrics picked fast.
The combo rips through Pretty Polly, cloggers stop, feet hot.
 
A serenade for Margaret's last day of summer, next, classes start.
Dry leaves rustle, the sun sets sooner. It won't stay hot.  


© by Margaret Coombs.
Used with the author's permission.



Margaret Coombs is a retired academic librarian who lives in Manitowoc, Wisconsin. She recently changed her writing name to her birth name as a way to connect with the literary dreams she had as a child. Margaret's work has appeared in several publications and her first chapbook, The Joy of Their Holiness, was published in 2020 under the name Peggy Turnbull. Learn about Margaret at https://margaretcoombs.com/.

 

 


Post New Comment:
Lori Levy:
Definitely feel hot reading this poem.
Posted 08/11/2021 06:29 PM
Sharon Waller Knutson:
I love this charming picturesque poem. Loved the repetition of the word hot.
Posted 08/11/2021 12:44 PM
IngridBruck:
I loved your ghazal about the friendly country social. So hot, so vivid, I can hear the music.
Posted 08/11/2021 11:11 AM
Wilda Morris:
Excellent form for this hot-weather poem. And wonderful details!
Posted 08/11/2021 08:43 AM
Rob:
Great details and fun, purposeful repetition of "hot"--like not matter what someone there is doing, the heat is always weighing on them!
Posted 08/11/2021 06:58 AM


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