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Her face peered at me through tall grass
and we held our breath,
still-lives in dappled light,
not sure of the other
curious-wonder at meeting at all.
I spoke calming
she listened
I stepped passing
she stood still.
We held each other with our eyes,
slow danced at the edge of the golden woods
on an orange October morning.
The moon and sun watched
as the south wind brushed past the north
to warm the day,
midnight frost trickled
sliding off the brittle leaves swirling.
I moved away.
I felt her follow.
And, when I looked back
she pressed closer stopped closer
before crossing the gravel path
before leaping through the grass,
her white tail held high.
I watched her become the trees.
This poem previously appeared in Visiting Morning and Other Quiet Places (2008),
Avocet, A Journal of Nature Poems (Fall/Winter, 2010) and A Prairie Journal (Fall/Winter 2007).
Used here with the author’s permission.
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Susan B. Auld is a poet and artist living in the Chicago area. She has focused on Modern English Haiku over the last 14 years, many of which are featured in her book, Chrysanthemum Dusk (Red Moon Press). Susan's free verse is collected in the books, Waiting Innocence and Visiting Morning and Other Quiet Places. Her work has also appeared in a wide array of online and in print journals. Susan finds joy, renewal, and inspiration in the natural world and tries to maintain a simple and mindful lifestyle. Both her poetry and her watercolors reflect her spiritual relationship with nature.
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Vtunger:
Very nice, great talent, and such soulful words so needed these days as any
Posted 10/05/2018 08:45 AM
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transitions:
Gentle and beautiful. How a hunter could destroy such innocence is beyond my comprehension. Judy
Posted 10/28/2011 09:31 AM
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69Dorcas:
Lovely. Reminds me of Bambi and his mother. Thank you.
Posted 10/27/2011 05:30 PM
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Eiken:
So beautiful:)))
Posted 10/27/2011 11:33 AM
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Rob:
really captures the magic of two species encountering and wondering about one another :)
Posted 10/27/2011 11:24 AM
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KevinArnold:
Ah, yes, deer. Warm,evocative poem--thanks.
Posted 10/27/2011 09:39 AM
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dotief@comcast.net:
I love the ending! Great poem!
Posted 10/27/2011 07:50 AM
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rtaylor947@aol.com:
Beautiful poem, reminiscent of Mary Oliver's work but with Auld's unique imprint. The ending is a nice surprize.
Posted 10/27/2011 07:47 AM
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