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first warm breeze,
confetti
flutters in the garden
first come the snowdrops,
followed by daffodils.
A warm breeze arrives
on the coattails of tulips
and
pink cherry blossoms
release spring
but, winter's final exhalation
unleashes one last storm
and white confetti swirls
around the lovers
sitting,
hearts in flutters.
Experiencing life,
for the first time
in the garden
© by Jana Kalina.
Used here with the author's permission.
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Jana Kalina lives with her husband on Vancouver Island. During her lifetime, she has lived extensively on three of the planet's seven continents and, today, her pursuits can be distilled down to three things: Buddhism, bonsai cultivation and, of course, poetry--especially haiku.
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barbsteff:
"life for the first time/in the garden" evokes the Genesis story of Adam and Eve.
Very evocative poem of spring and falling apple blossom petals.
One can skiny dip off Vancouver Island???
Posted 03/28/2017 02:12 PM
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KevinArnold:
I'm not sure why the ending works so well , but it does.
Posted 03/28/2017 08:53 AM
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Larry Schug:
An event worth celebrating with a fine poem!
Posted 03/28/2017 07:31 AM
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