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being of wrinkly age myself.
It's as if we were fellow immigrants
in the country of the young,
the fresh faced
and so often self-absorbed,
with their new enthusiasms
which they fancy
set the standards for all time.
No, give me a woman who knows
how fashions come and go
who's earned her wrinkles
with toil and grief
with whom I can empathize,
and compare notes.
© by Richard Greene.
Used with the author's permission.
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Richard Greene began writing poetry in the 8th grade, inspired by the opening lines of Longfellow's “Evangeline”—“This is the forest primeval. The murmuring pines and the hemlocks / Bearded in moss and in garments green, indistinct in the twilight"—which he was required to read in class. In college, after a classmate deemed Richard’s rhyming poem “trite,” he stopped writing until, a couple of years later, a class with Henry Rago, subsequently editor of Poetry magazine, inspired him to resume his efforts. But poetry fell by the wayside for almost forty years as a busy career in international development consumed his life. As retirement approached, however, Richard’s dedication to poetry returned; he has since published three chapbooks: The Broken Guitar: Poems of War; Becoming Old: Poems of Aging; Painting with Words: Landscapes in Verse; and one full -length collection, To Talk of Many Things: Selected Poems. Richard, who lives in Nyack, New York, shares a "poem of the week" with anyone interested; get on his mailing list by requesting it at greeneplace@gmail.com.
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Janet Leahy:
Candle light is nice, the wrinkles still there but softer,
great poem!
Posted 10/01/2021 05:38 PM
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CamilleBalla:
A nice surprise poem. I enjoyed it and read it more than once.Thank you, Richard.
Posted 10/01/2021 01:47 PM
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Lori Levy:
Great poem!
Posted 10/01/2021 12:14 PM
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paradea:
Yes. Look for the wrinkles!!! We have so much more to say! Great poem!
Posted 10/01/2021 11:13 AM
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KevinArnold:
Obviously, a man who knows just what to say.
Posted 10/01/2021 10:33 AM
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Sharon Waller Knutson:
Fully wrinkled and qualified as an object of the speaker's affection, I can relate to this witty and wise poem. Bravo for being brave and bold to stick up for the old.
Posted 10/01/2021 09:39 AM
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Larry Schug:
Especially wrinkles like parentheses or quotation marks around shining eyes!
Posted 10/01/2021 08:01 AM
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KinVT:
Oh my, I suspect you will get many positive comments for this poem, Richard..& perhaps more than a few invitations to dinner as well. :)
Thank you. Your poem made me smile..& decades of smiles add the best wrinkles.
Posted 10/01/2021 07:56 AM
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