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My grandfather was always Bam to me.
An odd name---even 65 years ago---
but he loved it when I called him that
and showed me his skinny old face
of sun-tanned leather, with a three-day
beard and a nearly toothless smile.
Bam spent most days working in his shop,
wearing a greasy striped canvas apron and
a railroad engineer's cap. He beat red-hot steel
on his pony-size anvil, creating a clang heard
all over the block, then thrust the hot metal
into water that hissed like a steam engine. I
watched him work and knew if I came too
close, he would lay down his five-pound
hammer and place a gentle, dirty hand on
my chest or head. When I left Bam's shop, I
washed my hands with rough Lava soap that
stung like a wire brush on my ten-year-old skin.
This poem first appeared in The Chiron Review (Issue 21, Spring 2020).
Used here with permission.
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Ronald Lauderbach says he writes poetry to celebrate life and because he likes to play with language. A retired high school English and journalism teacher (he also coached Pony League, for 12- and 13-year-olds), he tries to follow the advice he gave his students: If you write poetry that moves you, it will move others. Ron lives in San Diego, California.
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Lucy Lehman:
Wonderful poem. I love how your poems are so varied. Congratulations on your Honorable mention award!
Lucy Lehman
Posted 02/24/2023 02:36 PM
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Wilda Morris:
The images are wonderful. I can see this happening. And I remember the Lava!
Posted 09/17/2022 11:10 AM
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Leslie Hodge:
Wonderful sense of place and people. Very moving.
Posted 09/13/2022 03:20 PM
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Lori Levy:
Your grandfather comes alive for me in this poem. Beautiful.
Posted 09/13/2022 12:48 PM
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paradea:
Love this poem!!! Grandfathers are sooo special! Wish I could see mine in all his glory, clearing land by hand with his three grandchildren along, to play all day in the woods and creek and eat a picnic lunch!! Love you, Pappaw!!
Posted 09/13/2022 12:17 PM
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cork:
I love the engineer's cap and the Lava soap. Details are so important.
Posted 09/13/2022 10:51 AM
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thomsonscorpio@yahoo.com:
Loved This Poem Ron. Thank you for the sweet, memory.
Posted 09/13/2022 10:47 AM
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Michael:
Well-crafted; full of enticing visuals and sounds. Thank you, Ronald.
Posted 09/13/2022 09:24 AM
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Sharon Waller Knutson:
I love this picturesque character sketch of a grandfather who is dear to the poets heart. It makes it all more meaningful because it is told from the point of a ten year old boy. And because the speaker describes the old man warts and all, he becomes dear to our heart too. My favorite line: "I watched him work and knew if I came too close, he would lay down his five-pound hammer and place a gentle, dirty hand on my chest or head."
Posted 09/13/2022 08:41 AM
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mail@schoolbusmart.com:
Great images from Bams toothless smile to his greasy striped canvas apron and engineers hat and the clang of a 5 pound hammer and gentle dirty hands. I think Id call him Bam too. Randy Mazie
Posted 09/13/2022 07:49 AM
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