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We set up our tent, secure the gear,
and sink into the deep green quiet
of the woods, even though it's a state campground,
and boomboxes crackle by the campfires,
even though we've brought our children,
one of whom doesn't understand the meaning of silence,
but babbles in his own language like clear water
running in a stream, or the lake water rippling
off the prow of our canoe as we drift at twilight;
the full moon spills its light in the water,
bull frogs chug-a-rum in the cattails,
the thin blue smoke of campfires rises in the hemlocks,
circles the lake, a tart blue, the berries we picked
on the island, where the bushes grew over our heads,
but now the dark tent of night covers the sky,
and we drift off to sleep, soughed by the pines,
our breath in the tent rises, joins the small music
of the crickets and katydids, floats all the way
to the harmony of the stars.
From Ordinary LifePre (Byline Press, 2001).
This poem first appeared in the Christian Science Monitor in 1993. I
Used here with the author's permission.
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Barbara Crooker's award-winning poems have appeared in numerous magazines, journals, and anthologies and have been featured on the BBC, the ABC (Australian Broadcasting Company), The Writer's Almanac, and in the Poetry at Noon series at the Library of Congress. Recipient of many fellowships and residencies in the U.S., as well as in Ireland and France, she was also a Grammy finalist for her part in the audio version of the popular anthology, Grow Old Along with Me--the Best is Yet to Be. Barbara lives in Fogelsville, Pennsylvania. Learn more about Barbara at www.barbaracrooker.com.
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Lori Levy:
So beautiful.
Posted 06/15/2024 02:29 PM
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Larry Schug:
This poem builds to a wondrous ending. It makes my breath quicken.
Posted 06/15/2024 11:05 AM
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Sharon Waller Knutson:
Barbara Crooker is a master of language and metaphors. I love the imagery and music. She put me there at the campgrounds. I can see the cattails, the pines, the moon, the dark tent of sky, hear the bullfrog, the children's chatter, the katydids, crickets and taste the blueberries.
Posted 06/15/2024 10:56 AM
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EstherJ:
Beautiful, I can imagine myself there.
Posted 06/15/2024 09:31 AM
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jtmilford:
very accurately portrays camping in a state park campground. Brings back memories. Thanks
Posted 06/17/2014 01:39 PM
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Jo:
Thanks Barbara.
So good to hear your voice--anywhere, anytime.
Posted 06/15/2014 02:49 PM
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Katrina:
I love the rhythm of the title.
Posted 06/15/2014 01:37 PM
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Glen Sorestad:
I'm right there with you, Barbara. Lovely details, so convincing!
Posted 06/15/2014 09:49 AM
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phebe.davidson@gmail.com:
Beautiful. Just. . .beautiful!
Posted 06/15/2014 06:47 AM
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KevinArnold:
Yes, the unexpectedly-memorable lines of this for me were so personal:
even though we've brought our children,
one of whom doesn't understand the meaning of silence,
but babbles in his own language like clear water
running in a stream, or the lake water rippling
Posted 06/15/2014 05:35 AM
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r1manchester:
always good stuff from this lady...always
Posted 06/15/2014 04:37 AM
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