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Under the maple
I left certainty behind—
summer afternoon
© by David M. Tookey.
Used here with the author's permission.
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David M. Tookey is a retired elementary school teacher who lives in Washington state. He's grateful for time spent with family and enjoys reading, writing, baking, walking, hiking, and cycling. David believes the most reliable way to find inspiration for poems is to always
pay attention to things, especially the little things.
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Anastasia:
Perfect for today's too-hot-to-read-something-long weather!
Posted 08/15/2022 07:11 PM
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Lori Levy:
I agree with Larry about the middle line.
Posted 08/15/2022 06:35 PM
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Larry Schug:
The middle line leaves much to ponder.
Posted 08/15/2022 11:49 AM
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KevinArnold:
Short and sweet.
Posted 08/15/2022 09:44 AM
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Janet Leahy:
This poem takes us to a glorious summer afternoon.
Just lovely.
Posted 08/15/2022 08:58 AM
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cork:
I counted every syllable.
Posted 08/15/2022 08:56 AM
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Wilda Morris:
Proof that 5-7-5 can still work for haiku!
Posted 08/15/2022 08:34 AM
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Joan Luther:
Short n sweet slice of summer. Ahhhhhhhhhhh.
Posted 08/15/2022 07:41 AM
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